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You didn't know how long you'd been down there. Chained to this wall, but what you did know was the familiar sound of your stomach growling for food. That, and the sound of your breathing were the only sounds you heard. You held your breath when you heard the basement door open. You did not know who it was but had a pretty good clue. Suddenly you feel someone unlocking the chains. You dropped down onto your knees. "Shh. Be quiet. You don't want him to hear you do you?" A voice said. You shook your head and tried to get a good look at the person who was your savior. "What is your name?" Your voice barely above a whisper. "Toris. That's all you need to know. Now you really need to be quiet. I'm going to try to sneak you out the back door. When I do, you need to run like hell and not look back. Just run as fast as you can." He led you to a door and opened it. You covered your eyes due to the sun shining in them.

Toris pushed you out the door. "Now go." He said with a smile on his face. Yet he never did quite stop shaking. You thanked him and did what he said. You ran. Ran faster then you have ever done before. If only your gym teacher could see you now. Then something made you stop. You did not know what it was or why you did but you had one of those gut feelings. Something was telling you to turn back. Back to the person who held you captive. You turned your head and saw that Ivan had Toris by the collar. He was shaking him rather violently. Probably for helping you escape. Suddenly, he flicked his head in your direction, dropped Toris and started to come near you. You tried to run but were frozen. Almost as if in a trance. With each step the Russian man got closer and closer, until he was standing right in front of you. "So sunflower, I see that you tried to escape." He said caressing your face. "Please don't hurt me. I really do not like it. If you ever want to make friends, well taking someone at their will and chaining them to a wall isn't a good way to start." You said and pulled his hand off of you.

He had a shocked look on his face and his eyes were filled with hurt. He backed up a ways from you, sat down, hugged his knees and buried his face in them. Even though your brain was telling you to run like hell you walked over to him, rubbing his head and trying to comfort him in a way that only you knew how. He looked up at you. Tears welling up in his violet eyes. You took the chance and wiped his tears. "Ivan..." For the first time since you two had met you were the one to kiss him. He kissed back and this time it was with passion. Not with roughness. When you were done you looked into his eyes and saw that they held joy, not the pained eyes that you commonly saw. He wiped the tears from his eyes, stood up and hugged you. "I-I am truly sorry for what I did. It was wrong of me. What you said about needing a friend...you were right. I should never have taken you against your will and chained you to a wall. Please don't leave me. Please." You had to debate everything that had happened. How could you tell if what he said was the actual truth? For all you could know he was planning something horrible. Again, you got that gut feeling and went with it. You stayed with Ivan and it turns out that what he said was without a doubt true. He was a lot nicer towards his servants and always seemed to be in a happy mood. All because of you.
Because a butt-load of people commented saying they wanted the old story to be continued. So here ya go people. This was made possible from help by one of my buddies::icongabrile:

For those that haven't read the first part here it is: [link]

As always I do not own Russia nor the lovely picture.
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XxGreyFeatherxX Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh lord. My kol. Tat's nuut goooood. MY BRAIN EXPLODED I CANT TALK RIGHT NAO
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
NOES!!!
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SwedishPichi Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
OH MEH GAWD~!!!! I LOVE THIS~!!!!!!
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you. I love your icon
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MegaAnimeFreak7 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
We at :iconhetards: hold a strict "No Readers" policy. We will have to remove this deviation from our folders. You have been given one warning. Please do not do this again. We apologize for being so harsh, but rules are rules.
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Lady0Red Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Man is Ivan such a child at heart .... a cute fluffy little child whom which I adore :love:
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:iconveronica-the-fox:
veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Student Writer
Yep^^
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Maru-Russia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
so cute!
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:iconveronica-the-fox:
veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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Larrygandalfp Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Aww. This is so adorable!
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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Larrygandalfp Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
No prob.
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:iconveronica-the-fox:
veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
Your icon is really cool
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Larrygandalfp Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Thanks, I like yours too.
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:iconveronica-the-fox:
veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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CanadianThanks Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was a sudden change, Ivan is such a yandere :iconivanstareplz: I love him though! Great story :)
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
B-but he had skeletons!... in his basement! Damn this Stockholm Syndrome! xD
LOL, Awesome story! Love it! :D Is there going to be more? :D
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
Haha wow XD Um not to this story no, but I will write another story like it sometime if that's what you mean
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha! Okay, well, I look forward to more stories from you then! ^^
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
Okay thanks ^^
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob ^^ <3
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YellowBeast Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...Huh...
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Isasunflower Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dat was all but beautiful first ivan was a jerk but now he's lovable :D
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Writer
Yep
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infiniteangel24 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww, I love happy endings :D
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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C-io Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
:iconsmilieplz: Awww~
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
:iconimhappyplz:
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KatariinaP Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
D'aawwwwwww~
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
Yush. Happy ending.
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DarkMortality Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
like it ^_^ a lot ='D
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
cute^^
this inspired me for a read~
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
awesome and thanks
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
^^ welcome!!
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Writer
:iconimhappyplz:
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RoarinStar Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yay, now i can go to sleep without worrying about nightmares! :D
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
That is good
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AnimeArielle Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
CUTE!
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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NaraUzumaki Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
XD ^J^
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Writer
XD I see your a Pewdiepie fan :iconbrofistplz:
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NaraUzumaki Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Hai, X3 BroFist
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
Brofist
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NaraUzumaki Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
x3
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
XD
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Binks0Sake Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so awesome XDD
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veronica-the-fox Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Writer
thanks
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Binks0Sake Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome XDD
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